Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
A Poor Man's treat?
I couldnโt wait for my class to end so I could run outside and find
el carrito (Stand)
I fell in love with the feeling and the taste before I even knew what love was.
I stood outside holding my motherโs hand waiting for her to ask
the times she did not ask I would pull on her plaid, decently long skirt and looked over towards the man selling raspados
She knew what I wanted and she knew how much I wanted it.
I focused on ... 2๏ธโฃ โฌ๏ธ
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
el carrito
as if looking at it would be enough to call the gods of raspados to have mercy over me
They cost $1.50. My mother gives me the money
I run over
The man says
te faltan, no es suficiente (not enough)
I was devastated, I began to take step back slowly, I dared to not look at my mother with this disappointment.
I barely noticed the lady standing behind the man, she was the boss 3๏ธโฃ โฌ๏ธ
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
I noticed she was looking towards my mother
Maybe she saw in my motherโs face something convincing, or maybe my confusion triggered a mother instinct
Whatever it was, it was enough
As I walked away slowly with my first heart break,
the lady behind says,
tiene antojo, tu daselo (She has a craving, give it to her) 4๏ธโฃ โฌ๏ธ
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
I thanked her with my smile and with a slight flitter in my heart of happiness and even more with my taste buds having a celebration just by looking at how this raspado was being made
The beautiful sound of the mountain man, holding a metal, rectangular shaver of ice
containing it all inside until it was ready to be placed in the cup. The small stones pile one by one when crushed
Just big enough to hold shape and small enough to enjoy 5๏ธโฃ โฌ๏ธ
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
Then the miel con sabor a tamarindo being delicately set on top, like a creamy blanket in liquid form
Si, con limon y sal, porfavor, y poquito chile (add salt and lemon, and a bit of spice... Please)
because my mom taught me how to be polite
and then, to my surprise the actual fruit
tamarindo on top, a light brown coloring with a soft cover on the hardened seed inside 6๏ธโฃ โฌ๏ธ
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
It decorated with grace and delight, the treat awaiting for me
I felt the richness
There I learned my first lesson of kindness By: Unknown Author
Peyz33 aka Karen๐๐บ๐ธ
4 years ago
Beautiful โฅ๏ธ
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
Thank you, so much my dear, @Peyz33 aka Karen ๐บ๐ธ ๐ค ๐ for the sweet kind and encouraging words, it's very much appreciated. โค๏ธ๐๐น๐ค๐๐
katcor
4 years ago
Gorgeous artwork, such a beautiful and touching poem๐๐๐๐๐๐ค
sandra137๐บ๐ธ๐ท๐ธ๐ฎ
4 years ago
gorgeous ๐น๐น๐น๐๐๐๐
Vanessa
4 years ago
Very Well Done ๐
TSsChaos
4 years ago
Beautiful
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
Thank you, so much @katcor &@sandra๐ฆนโโ๏ธ๐ธ๐ฎ &@Vanessa &@TSsChaos for the kind and encouraging words, it's very much appreciated. ๐๐น๐ค๐๐
yaya ya๐บ๐ธ
4 years ago
Sheโs beautiful @Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น & I love the flowers
Kim G. J.
4 years ago
What a truly beautiful story and of course your coloring is exquisite!
Philomena ๐บ๐ธ
4 years ago
Beautiful, beautiful
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
Thank you, so much @Rainbow Penguin๐๐งBACK!!! &@yaya ya๐บ๐ธ &@Kim G. J. &@Philomena ๐บ๐ธ for the kind and encouraging words, it's very much appreciated. ๐๐น๐ค๐๐
LW Art/Lori
4 years ago
Gorgeous
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago
Thank you, so much @LW Art/Lori for the kind and encouraging words, it's very much appreciated. ๐๐น๐ค๐๐
Patrick ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ฎ๐น
4 years ago